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[* black] [product|IF145-000|Plastic opening tools] make cracking the Nexus shell like cutting through [http://www.slashgear.com/google-talks-project-butter-for-android-4-1-jelly-bean-27235867/|butter], thanks to its retaining clips around the perimeter of the device.
[* black] ***One millimeter.***
- [* black] That's the difference in thickness between the glued iPad and the retaining-clipped Nexus.
- [* black] That's the difference between being able to open a device and service its internals, and not.
+ [* black] That's the difference in thickness from the glued iPad to the retaining-clipped Nexus.
+ [* black] That's the difference between being able to open a device and service all of its internals, and not.
[* black] That's the ''negligible'' difference between extending the life of your device through repair, as opposed to tossing it in a landfill.
-[* black] And most of all, that one millimeter difference is not felt nor perceived as derogatory to our iPad-weathered hands. Nobody will complain about that one millimeter difference in day-to-day use, but it will make all the difference when the device gets dropped and it breaks.
+[* black] And most of all, that one millimeter difference is neither felt nor disdained by our iPad-weathered hands. Nobody will complain about that one millimeter difference in day-to-day use, but the user-serviceability it brings will make all the difference when the device gets dropped and breaks.